What began in gadgetry developed into an effort to create a set of contemporary poetic responses to the I Ching.

The project, the process:

The I Ching in its rawest form is comprised of short, quite opaque sayings that have been much expanded and commented upon by later authors. The binary nature of the I Ching has been a source of continuous interest over the centuries.

My wife bought me a new cell phone, which I immediately re-purposed as an .mp3 player that takes photos and the occasional call or text. One of its features is a little yellow box into which one can type messages with a maximum of 100 characters.

The pairing of digital phone with I Ching-inspired poetry seemed natural. My first efforts were of random responses to the I Ching, based on my daily readings. The only rule was that these responses were limited to 100 characters.

In my continuing search for yet more restrictive forms of creativity, I settled into the haiku form for these responses, expanding into full sets of commentaries rather than random outbursts. Despite my use of the Japanese poetic form, what follows here are not by any stretch a translation of Japanese developments in the Chinese I Ching.

Further down this road, my intent shifted toward bringing the I Ching into a form whereby the theme or metaphor of a hexagram and its lines could be grasp in a single view, as it seems likely that they were in their earliest forms. This quality has generally been lost beneath many centuries of commentary.

For source material I generally settled on two fairly obscure texts: The Buddhist I Ching by Chih-hsu Ou-i (composed about 1640 CE) and The Taoist I Ching by Liu I-ming (1796 CE). Both are translated by Thomas Cleary, both reflect relatively late developments in Chinese thought before Western influences began to significantly intrude, both were in my collection through chance encounters in used book stores. The Tao works in mysterious ways.

I also take a perverse amusement in attaching ridiculously long titles to short poems.

What follows are not interpretations of the I Ching in any conventional sense. Thus they’re entitled “responses” and tend to reflect my emotional state at the time of their composition. These states are not always consonant with Taoist-Confucionist-Buddhist ideals.

For those generally unacquainted with the I Ching — please see links in the comment section below for explanations on what is and how the hexagrams are generated. For those with a casual acquaintance: each of the 64 hexagrams inspires a Judgment (an overall comment on the meaning) followed by commentaries on the six individual lines. Hexagrams are traditionally read from the bottom up.

Seven Haiku in Response to Hexagram 1,
Derived From Commentaries by Liu I-ming and Kong Fu
Quintessential light,
life, strength, creativity.
Indomitable.

6
Dragon unbalanced,
too proud, too strong, too stiff; there
is cause for regret.

5
Dragon in the sky,
bringing balance to the world:
follow your own kind.

4
Dragon in the nest,
waiting for the right moment:
make a careful choice.

3
Work away the day,
keep watch through the night: look with-
in, become faultless.

2
Dragon in the field,
balanced and correct: seek wis-
dom in great men.

1
Dragon in the egg
at the beginning of strength:
don’t spread wings too soon.

In Response to Anthony’s Commentary on Hexagram 1,
and Wing’s Commentary on Hexagram 2,
(and Emma Noticed a Connection with Hexagram 55):
Attend to neither
that big bright screen nor
the little man
behind the curtain.
See beyond structure
In Response to the Traditional Commentary on Hexagram 1, Line 4:
Deep in the abyss,
Young Dragon on a trampoline,
leaping,
soaring,
creating new reality
Seven Haiku in Response to Hexagram 2
Derived From Commentaries by Chih-hsu Ou-i:
Ultimate recep-
tivity; softness and shade.
Practical wisdom.

6
Coagulating
blood of battling dragons: doubts
provoke an impasse.

5
Faded jeans, sensi-
ble shoes. Who guesses you are
near enlightenment?

4
Closing up the bag,
resting in the moment. No
harm, no blame, no praise.

3
Disguising your gifts
as you walk through the great world.
A good conclusion.

2
Upright on the path;
thought and act are one. Who is
not enriched by this?

1
First frost of autumn;
hard ice soon to follow. Do
not stray from the path.

Haiku In Response to The Somewhat Confusing Collective Responses to Hexagram 2, Line 4:
About that tied up sack—
Who ties it? When? How? and Why?
Pay no mind.
Fly free.
An Epigram and Six Haiku in Response to Hexagram 3
Derived From Commentaries by Chih-hsu Ou-i and Liu I-ming:
Knowledge grows from ignorance;
thoughts create their own reality.
Rain and thunder: painful lessons.

6
Prepared but standing
still, no progress possible.
Weeping tears of blood.

5
Delaying rewards:
fortunes are improving but
there is much to learn.

4
Prepared but standing
still: time to seek a teacher.
Benefit for all.

3
Wandering in the
woods, hunting without a guide.
Impatience yields regret.

2
Progressing is hard;
prepared but standing still. Be
patient, be fulfilled.

1
Resting in stillness:
making the foundation firm,
setting up the rules.

In Response to Anthony’s Commentary on Hexagram 3, Line 5,
(A Sentiment Repeated in Her Commentary on Hexagram 59)
And Further Amplified by LiSe’s Commentary on Hexagram 40:
Guilt constructs the highest wall,
inferiority cuts the deepest moat.
Disengage,
let yourself free.
Seven Haiku In Response to Commentaries on Hexagram 4
Derived From Liu I-ming and Chih-hsu Ou-i:
Ask for help, young fool.
Contemplate the first wise words.
Then you’re on your own…

6
Following the Tao,
driving darkness out with light,
nourishing your flame.

5
Innocent blindness.
Darkest night shades into gray;
Inner light begins.

4
Darkness, more darkness
in the company of fools.
Wallowing in shame.

3
Chasing your desires
like a gold-digging woman.
Dark begets more dark.

2
Darkness before dawn.
Nourish your young family,
raise up a strong heir.

1
Waking before dawn:
Disciplined mind and body.
(Don’t go back to bed!)

An Epigram and Six Haiku In Response to Liu I-ming’s Commentary on Hexagram 5:
Sometime
(only in its time)
nurture strength
balance strength
use strength
leave strength
cross the water

6
Entering the cave:
three sagacious friends arrive,
lighting up the world.

5
Waiting at food and
drink: full belly, quiet mind,
no danger within.

4
Waiting in the blood:
aware of your helplessness,
free to leave the cave.

3
Waiting in the mud:
mired by your own impatience,
your worst enemy.

2
Waiting in the sand:
bogged down in your presumption,
your own worst critic.

1
Waiting on the fringe:
one foot in this world, saving
strength for a new day.

Six Haiku and an Epigram In Response to Liu I-ming’s Commentary on Hexagram 6:
When the truth is blocked,
Moderation saves the day.
Seek the wise; stay calm.

6
Medals and acclaim
come and go in a day.
A small gain over others;
a far greater loss within.

5
Virtue wins the day;
others sense your wisdom and
repent. Auspicious.

4
Refusing to con-
tend, choosing the higher path.
Good fortune finds you.

3
Defended by your
reputation; no need to
contend. Honor wins.

2
Retreat from stalemate.
Returning to your domain,
no trouble follows.

1
Little to contend.
Why hang on to this nonsense?
Small blame, good outcome.

In Response to Chih-hsu’s Commentary on Hexagram 6:
Arrows of regret
have entered your heart,
carrying old grief into new times.
A great loss.
Seven Haiku In Response to Commentaries on Hexagram 7 by Liu I-ming:
A mature leader,
faultlessly commanding in
a time of danger.

6
After peace breaks out,
reward merit, chastise fools,
avoid sycophants.

5
Discipline slipping.
Mature leaders restore ranks;
youngsters bring defeat.

4
Sound retreat, make camp.
A timely withdrawal is best
when you can’t advance.

3
Casualties of war:
sad consequence of impat-
ience and ignorance.

2
At the center of
the action, responding to
the need. Good fortune.

1
Setting forth must be
in order – otherwise, all
will end in regret.

Epigrams and Haiku In Response to Commentaries on Hexagram 8
Derived from Chih-hsu Ou-i and Liu I-ming:
Graceful harmony
maintained by vigilance.
Attracting followers;
Latecomers meet with regret.

6
Accord without a
leader is no accord at all.
No good comes from this.

5
Manifest accord
springing from strength in balance.
Abandon the false.

4
Rightful accord with
wise teachers. Learn from their acts,
follow their teachings.

3
Wrongful accord with
improper people. What good
can come from this mess?

2
Accord from within.
Mastering the mind, refin-
ing the self. Correct.

1
Truthful accord. Fill-
ing the plain vessel brings good
fortune to the world.

In Response to Chih-hsu’s Commentary on Hexagram 9:
Heavy clouds will pass in
their own time.
Leave your umbrella at home,
tend to your garden.
Seven Haiku In Response to Liu I-ming’s Commentary on Hexagram 9:
Wind up in the sky;
Dense clouds are promising rain.
Nourish now the small.

6
Moon is almost full
after the rain. Pull the weeds,
look toward bigger things.

5
Exchanges among
true friends. Great gifts are found in
humble packages.

4
No airs nor pride nor
pretentiousness. Honest weak-
ness refines itself.

3
Your wheels have come off.
Big egos make no progress.
Veiled eyes hide cold shame.

2
Humble teachers lead
by following. Emptiness
leads to fulfillment.

1
Strong yet humble, wise,
ever-learning, able to
return to the path.

Seven Haiku In Response to Commentaries on Hexagram 10
by Liu I-ming and Chih-hsu Ou-i:
The Tiger is good-
natured but not infinite-
ly patient. Take heed.

6
Observe your treading,
contemplate felicity.
Auspicious return.

5
Decisive treading,
properly balanced, upright,
benefiting all.

4
Tightrope on Tiger’s
tail: proceed with great caution.
Things will turn out well.

3
Squinting, limping, stomp-
ing on the Tiger’s tail. Mis-
fortune all around.

2
Treading a level
path, untroubled by the world,
upright, fortunate.

1
Treading most firmly,
confidently, sincerely,
going without fault.

In Response to Anthony’s Commentary on Hexagram 10, Line 5:
Realizing now
far too late
those times i
threw myself away.

Recognition.

Remorse.

Release.

Seven Haiku In Response to Commentaries on Hexagram 11
by Liu I-ming and Chih-hsu Ou-i:
True tranquility:
pliancy on a solid
base. Development.

6
Strongest walls crumble.
What use is barking orders?
Change now with the times.

5
Bestowing heartfelt
gifts to trusted advisors.
Everyone prospers.

4
In unsettled times
join easily with neighbors.
No gain in false pride.

3
What goes up comes down.
Remain upright through hard times
and your fortune grows.

2
Tolerating weeds,
seeing and accepting all.
Time of great progress.

1
Lift up one reed and
others follow. So it is
with all humankind.

Seven Haiku In Response to Commentaries on Hexagram 12
by Chih-hsu Ou-i:
Façade of strength but
weakness below. Develop-
ment obstructed. Smog.

6
Obstruction over-
turned; utterly collapsing.
Joy comes in its place.

5
Stopping obstruction;
balanced and correct. Foresight
now prevents problems.

4
Embracing blessings
after the weakness passes.
Good order; no blame.

3
Embracing disgrace,
finding strength in your weakness.
Above your critics.

2
Embracing service,
responding to leadership.
Unease yields success.

1
Pulling up the reeds,
others follow. Leadership
shows it has true strength.

In Response to Wing’s Commentary on Hexagram 12:
A confederacy of dunces
A convocation of fools
Resistance is futile
Hide your light
Wait for better days
Seven Haiku In Response to Liu I-ming’s Commentary on Hexagram 13:
Be like the sun, like
the falling rain, everyone
equal in your sight.

6
All paths are the same
in city or countryside.
Transparent and free.

5
Firm in your vision.
Those most critical become
your greatest allies.

4
Fighting to a draw.
Agreeing to disagree
is the wisest course.

3
Birds with gaudy plumes
gather with their kind only,
victims of success.

2
Attached to your clan.
A shameful short-sightedness
inhibits your growth.

1
Discerning vision,
free of sentiment as you
pass beyond the gate.

Haiku In Response to Wilhelm’s Commentary on Hexagram 13, Line 4:
Mexican standoff.
Dare not breathe, or even blink…
Time to end this war.
Seven Haiku In Response to Commentaries on Hexagram 14
by Chih-hsu Ou-i and Liu I-Ming:
Great possession, great
success. Fully balanced in
firm strength; civilized.

6
Balanced in firmness
and flexibility. Great
Heaven completes you.

5
Mutual regard:
yourself in others, others
in you. Growing strength.

4
Your greatest possess-
ion: Strength and illumina-
tion grow stronger still.

3
Noble actions are
well received in heaven. Those
without merit fail.

2
A great wagon at
your service: balanced strength takes
you far in the world.

1
Avoid the harmful and
you shall be blameless. No fault
in your struggle.

In Response to Chih-hsu’s Commentary on an Anonymous Commentary on Hexagram 14, Line 5:
Anticipating challenges with
ambitious preparations
demonstrates your unpreparedness.
Disengage.
Seven Haiku In Response to Chih-hsu Ou-i’s Commentary on Hexagram 15:
Most gentle mountain,
model of humility
mentoring the earth.

6
Feigned humility,
trumpeted humility:
who is fooled by this?

5
At the center of
humility: no time for
pride; enlist helpers.

4
Reciprocal hu-
mility: beneficent;
enlightening all.

3
Complete yet humble:
successful yet not losing
touch with all the world.

2
Honest expression
of humility: harmon-
izing with your peers.

1
Great humility:
profound restraint enables
one to cross rivers.

Seven Haiku In Response to Chih-hsu’s Commentary on Hexagram 16:
Thunder roars, earth stirs—
music comes into the world
joyful, measured, true.

6
All good things must end.
Nothing to gain in chasing
happiness. Let go.

5
Existential angst:
neither joy nor sadness here.
Endless empty fog.

4
Be the source of joy,
the strong center of your clan,
encouraging all.

3
Begging happiness
as your true joy slips away…
open your eyes now.

2
Solid, rooted in
the Earth, action and repose
in their proper time.

1
Trumpeting your joy;
trying too hard to convince,
you convince no one.

Seven Haiku In Response toCommentaries on Hexagram 17
by Liu I-ming and Chih-hus Ou-i:
Following the time,
truth becomes self-evident.
A great benefit.

6
Following at an
impasse. Bound to your errors,
motives are confused.

5
Truthfulness in good,
following strength, flexible.
Greatly auspicious.

4
Following your gains:
a poor precedent. Return
to humility.

3
Follow the adult:
mature aims and aspira-
tions. True rectitude.

2
Following the child:
attaching to fantasies,
failing to mature.

1
Adjusting to the
times: thoughtful engagement
in the world. Fruitful.

In Response to Anthony’s Commentary on Hexagram 17:
Though you now
attach yourself
to someone else,
one day you will be free.

Good Fortune.

An Epigram and Six Haiku In Response to Liu I-ming’s Commentary on Hexagram 18:
In the dragon’s pool,
in the tiger’s lair,
work to correct
what has grown decadent.

6
Strong and flexible,
serving neither kings nor lords.
Above decadence.

5
Decadence in the
father, corrected by praise.
Skilled and flexible.

4
Decadence in the
father excused. Most shameful
degeneracy.

3
Decadence in the
father, corrected harshly.
Small regret, less blame.

2
Decadence in the
mother, corrected in gent-
leness. Humble.

1
Decadence in the
dead father, corrected by
his son. Buried blame.

A Slightly More Contemporary Response to Liu I-ming’s Commentary on Hexagram 18:
No shame, no blame,
when things get behind.

Clean out the fridge,
sweep the floor,
get back on the path.

Seven Haiku in Response to Hexagram 19
Derived from Commentaries by Chih-hsu Ou-i:
Boundless oceans up-
hold our bounded earth: sages
know the world will turn.

6
Attentive oversee-
ing is both good and blameless.
Boundaries dissolve.

5
Knowing oversee-
ing, proper for a wise king.
Balanced acts bode well.

4
Consumate guidance,
Impeccable mentoring.
(Who needs to say more?)

3
Presumptuous over-
seeing benefits no one.
Repent; blame will fade.

2
Sensitive guidance
benefits all. Harmonize
with the momentum.

1
Sensitive guidance
brings forth good result. Acts and
intent must balance.

Seven Haiku in Response to Hexagram 20
Derived from Commentaries by Chih-hsu Ou-i and Liu I-ming:
Watching, being watched;
between the worlds, a moment
of great Becoming.

6
Observing, observed:
a model now for others.
Live impeccably.

5
Observing your growth:
tall tree bending with the wind,
firm yet flexible.

4
Observing the world:
humble guests are treated well;
richly rewarded.

3
Observing the Self:
remorseless diagnosis.
Cast out the impure.

2
Discrete observing:
proper in its time and place;
little room to grow.

1
Naïve observing:
remarkable in youngsters,
not so in adults.

Six Haiku and an Epigram in Response to Hexagram 21
Derived from Commentaries by Chih-hsu Ou-i:
Biting through obstruc-
tions, slicing to the matter’s
core. Justice applied.

6
Head locked in a stock,
ears cut off: depending on
strength brings misfortune.

5
Biting dried meat, find-
ing golden marrow: princi-
ples are clear. Correct.

4
Biting to the bone,
finding an old arrowhead:
correcting old faults.

3
Biting dried meat, find-
ing poison: correcting your
path. Small shame, no blame.

2
Biting through skin, plug-
ging your nose, knowing that you
are not strong. No blame.

1
Feet locked in the stocks,
halting your intemperate advance;
forestalling greater errors.

Seven Haiku in Response to Hexagram 22
Derived from Commentaries by Chih-hsu Ou-i:
Outward stillness, in-
ward illumination. See
clearly; do not judge.

6
Adorned in simplic-
ity; inner light brightens
as you grow more pure.

5
Natural adorn-
ment; do not be embarrassed
by your modest means.

4
Adorned plainly, trav-
elling light and fast, seeking
wisdom beyond doubts.

3
Adorning the self
in illumination, a
mentor and a friend.

2
Adorning the mind
in seeking; lifted up by
sagagious teachers.

1
Adorning the feet
with dust; living simply, rich
in righteousness.

Haiku in Response to LiSe’s Commentary on Hexagram 22:
Volcano rests;
the potted sage
gives purifying smoke.

See essence,
contemplate all,
judge none.

Seven Haiku in Response to Commentaries on Hexagram 23

by Chih-Hsu Ou-i and Liu I-ming:

As the cycle ends,
what was solid melts away.
Wait through the changes.

6
Wise ones preserve the
kernal of wisdom; fools throw
it away. Take care.

5
The tide has turned, a
leader now appears. Greatly
beneficial.

4
Stripped of your own skin:
disaster now is looming.
Truly a nightmare.

3
Cutting loose from bad
influences, slowing the
decline. Without fault.

2
Cutting up the frame,
dismantling the structures of
wisdom. Misfortune.

1
Cutting off the legs:
the foundation vanishes.
Small error, great harm.

Seven Haiku in Response to Commentaries on Hexagram 24

by Chih-Hsu Ou-i and Liu I-ming:

Turning, returning,
companion strength now growing;
Have a place to go.

6
Straying from return,
turning from the proper path.
A full decade lost.

5
Attentive return:
Balanced reflection within.
Nothing to regret.

4
Returning alone
from among the noisy crowd:
learning from the world.

3
Repeated return;
slipping back but persever-
ing. Danger; no blame.

2
Good return, finding
your way through the dark, borrow-
ing light. Auspicious.

1
Return from a short
jaunt, never from from the Tao.
Very auspicious.

Seven Haiku in Response to Commentaries on Hexagram 25

by Chih-Hsu Ou-i and Liu I-ming:

Thunder rolls under
Heaven: perfect energy.
Strive to be correct.

6
Clinging to customs;
what worked before now obstructs.
Error and impasse.

5
Having an off day?
No need to worry. Joy comes
in its proper time.

4
Balanced and correct;
not falling into error.
Inherent virtue.

3
Planning, plotting, schemes;
your fortune’s carried off as
you impress yourself.

2
Not strong enough for
toil, you still may work within.
Rise above habits.

1
Work without error;
your aspirations may be
obtained in this life.

In Response to LiSe’s Commentary on Hexagram 25, Line 3:
No rain before 9 pm.
Storms on even days only.
No earthquakes any time.

The laws of men have limits.

In Response to Wilhelm’s Commentary on Hexagram 25, Line 4:
We cannot lose what belongs to us,
cannot destroy, deface, defend, deny…
It is simply ours
Seven Haiku In Response to Commentaries on Hexagram 26
by Chih-Hsu Ou-i and Liu I-ming:
Gathering power:
stilling strength, nurturing strength.
Tend fires, cross waters.

6
Carrying the world,
the universe, in great joy,
partner with the Tao.

5
Flexible and strong.
Docility contains great
power. Good fortune.

4
Protecting young growth;
directing and nurturing
with wise discipline.

3
Champing at the bit.
Stick to your routine; you will
have a place to go.

2
A cart without an
axle goes nowhere: build your
strength at home. No blame.

1
Runt of the litter.
To help others you first must
help yourself. Withdraw.

Seven Haiku In Response to Commentaries on Hexagram 27
by Chih-Hsu Ou-i and Liu I-ming:
Watching what you eat,
what you think, what you say and
do. Great benefit.

6
At nourishment’s source;
nothing will restrain you now.
Rest in highest good.

5
Just enough to eat,
living but not growing. Strive
to remain upright.

4
Generous Tiger,
nourishing others by fol-
lowing the good. True.

3
Living on junk food.
Intentions may be good, the
consequence is sad.

2
Living beyond your
means. No good can come of this.
Insupportable.

1
Your greatest fortune
slips away as you covet
my bowl of soup. Shame.

In Response to The Traditional Commentary on Hexagram 27, Line 2:
There is no sustenance
to be found
on those rocky slopes,
nor Sage to guide you.

Return to the path.

Another Response to Chih-hsu’s Commentary on Hexagram 27, Line 4:
In hungry times,
Tiger seeks sustenance
for all those
brave and humble
enough to ask.

Good fortune.

Seven Haiku In Response to Chih-hsu’s Commentary on Hexagram 28:
Alone at home, at
home alone. When you need no
one, you fear no thing.

6
No place left to go;
your reach now exceeds your grasp.
A silent collapse.

5
An old willow blooms,
old woman gets a young man.
Neither blame nor praise.

4
A ridgepole restored:
Good fortune in the moment
could turn into shame.

3
A bending ridge-pole:
Lacking flexibility,
dependency on strength.

2
An old willow sprouts,
an old man gets a young wife.
Happiness for all.

1
Spreading the mat, be-
ing the mat. Flexible and
strong, your wisdom will grow.

In Response to Anthony’s Commentary on Hexagram 28
With Reference to Hexagram 62:
To the uninitiated,
independence manifests as ambiguity.
Cultivate ambiguity.
Power is there.
Seven Haiku In Response to Liu I-ming’s Commentary on Hexagram 29:
Driven by shame, greed,
sinking ever further down.
Release; find fullness.

6
Bound by your habits,
forsaking the good. Years pass,
tangled in wild thorns.

5
Finding your level;
natural wisdom guides you
to authentic good.

4
Pausing on the thresh-
hold, looking toward the good;
borrowing wisdom.

3
Dangerous habits,
blind to your own decadence.
Shameful enslavement.

2
Catch yourself before
you fall too far; small gains
are better than none.

1
Into the hole in
the bottom of the sea; no
good came come of this.

In Response to the Traditional Commentary on Hexagram 29:
Dissolve your self.
Dissolve your fears.
The only thing that matters is
to do what is before you.
Seven Haiku In Response to Liu I-ming’s Commentary on Hexagram 30:
Clinging to the good
will transforms the great wide world.
Care for docile things.

6
Capturing the ring-
leader, the underlings set
free. Transforming all.

5
Shedding tears of joy,
releasing your past errors:
free to move forward.

4
Haste makes the greatest
waste. Bright fires burn quickest. Don’t
set yourself ablaze.

3
Sundown – a time for
caution. The young party as
elders weep. Ill luck.

2
Golden heart of fire.
Balanced and in harmony
on the middle way.

1
Your steps are awry—
Right intent, premature acts.
Attend with greatest care.

In Response to Wing’s Commentary on Hexagram 31:
Did we pass as
celestial ships
not passing by
but passing thru
each one the other

forever changed

Epigrams and Haiku in Response to Liu I-ming’s Commentaries on Hexagram 31:
Lake on Mountain’s top,
empty of ego, open
to the higher Self.

6
Passing the lips, the teeth, the tongue,
the Tao has flown away.
Only empty noise remains.

5
Stillness in the back,
near the heart yet not the heart.
The true mind is open to the highest good.

4
Tentative balance,
sensing Tao yet troubled by
your questing mind.

3
Feel it in your thighs:
persistence led by ego
slides into indulgence,
skids into embarrassment.

2
Flexing in the calf:
chasing whims,
ruled by your desires.
Be still;
let the Tao find you.

1
Twitching in your big toe,
itching with desires.
Purify your ambitions,
clarify your motives.

Seven Haiku In Response to Hexagram 32,
Derived from Commentaries by Liu I-ming and Chih-hsu Ou-i:
Wind follows thunder:
Eternal Impermanence,
balanced and correct.

6
Inconstant whirlwind:
all noise, no substance, spinning
into disaster.

5
Inflexible con-
stancy. Unyielding goals may
become your prison.

4
Empty fields. Rootless
wandering scares off the game.
Cultivate stillness.

3
Unbalanced, over-
balanced, easily detoured.
Humiliation.

2
Firm yet flexible,
balanced and correct. Regrets
vanish. Move forward.

1
Too deeply rooted,
clinging to false ideas,
unable to move.

Six Haiku and An Epigram In Response to Hexagram 33,
Derived from Commentaries by Richard Wilhelm, Liu I-ming, and Chih-hsu Ou-i:
Dark advancing now.
Withdraw in dignity;
withdraw in neither
hate nor haste.

Do not feed the ego.

6
Enlightened withdrawal.
beneficial and correct,
truly effortless.

5
Impeccable with-
drawal. Hiding in plain sight;
who can criticize?

4
Withdrawing from the
world, conserving strength. Not all
will succeed in this.

3
Entangled in the
social world. Personal at-
tachments drag you down.

2
Unbreakable bonds,
unshakeable devotion.
Immune to the world.

1
The last and the least,
menaced by the world. Stillness
is your only hope.

Seven Haiku in Response to Liu I-ming’s Commentaries on Hexagram 34:
Great Power: a gift
and a challenge. Seek wisdom;
act impeccably.

6
Horns caught in the fence;
No advancing, nor retreat.
Learn from your mistakes.

5
Release your stubborn-
ness, borrow strength if you must.
Ne regrette rien.

4
Correct yourself, lead
others. Yielding barriers;
powerful movement.

3
Butting horns against
a hedge: impetuous show
of rambunctious force

2
Self-mastery, wise
limits, power in balance,
becoming correct.

1
Ambitious feet climb
too far too fast, fall too soon.
Thus presumption fails.

Seven Haiku in Response Commentaries on Hexagram 35
by Chih-hsu Ou-i and Liu I-ming
Light over the Earth:
Rich gifts come to true leaders;
their light shines on all.

6
Advancing with horns:
an unenlightened path. First
correct your domain.

5
Freely advancing,
fearless of loss or gain. Great
joy will follow you.

4
A rodent’s advance:
empty, out of place and time,
inappropriate.

3
Advancing with peers,
to everyone’s approval.
Great upward progress.

2
Advancing in grief:
good luck follows your efforts.
Ancestors approve.

1
Advance is blocked; still
you must remain upright. Find
confidence. Succeed.

In Response to Chih-hsu’s Commentary on Hexagram 35, Line 4:
Hollow nuts
Hollow tree
Hollow life
Who do you impress
as you quiver in the dark
Supercilious Squirrel?
Seven Haiku in response to Liu I-ming’s Commentary on Hexagram 36
Light within darkness:
time for unobtrusiveness,
hiding in plain sight.

6
Misunderstanding
illumination; falling
from the heights. Damage.

5
An evil milieu:
hide your illumination.
One day it will shine.

4
In the heart of dark-
ness, finding the purest fire.
Transcend bad habits.

3
Dark before the dawn,
capturing the enemy.
Slow progress prevails.

2
Though wounded in the
leg, there’s still time to withdraw
if your will is strong.

1
Disguised withdrawal
in the wide daylight; pragmat-
ism saves your skin.

Seven Haiku in Response to Liu I-ming’s Commentary on Hexagram 37:
Flame of truth, rising
wind, exalted family
grow from faultless acts.

6
Strict beginnings yield
a dignified conclusion.
Trustworthy accord.

5
An expanding home,
all the world your peaceful king-
dom. Great good fortune.

4
A measured home.
Clear-mindedness gains treasures.
Slow progress endures

3
Discipline slipping;
wagging tongues and children un-
der foot. Take heed now.

2
Pure heart, quiet mind,
tending to your kitchen. No
outside thing dismays.

1
Peace resides within;
nothing outside troubles you.
Vanishing regrets.

Seven Haiku in Response to Commentaries on Hexagram 38
by Chih-hsu Ou-i and Liu I-ming:
Contending motives,
no sense of a common goal.
Still, small things succeed.

6
Isolated in
confusion. Vacillation
yields to harmony.

5
Vanishing regret,
clawing through constricting webs.
In time, celebrate.

4
Unsettled, alone.
Seek out wise teachers; the Tao
will find you. No fault.

3
Retrograde motion.
You bring about your own end,
defiled and defaced.

2
Meeting the master
in a narrow place. Triumph
of understanding

1
A missing horse comes
home; no harm seeing evil
No blame, no regret.

An Epigram and Six Haiku in Response to Commentaries on Hexagram 39
by Chih-hsu Ou-i and Liu I-ming:
Foggy mountaintop:
Danger over stillness.
Control danger, resolve danger,
develop character and virtue.

6
Going into dan-
ger, returning to yourself.
The aim is within.

5
In great danger, com-
panions come. Your balance is
an inspiration.

4
Going into dan-
ger, bringing back company:
your strength is growing.

3
Going into dan-
ger, coming back: contempla-
tion brings rejoicing.

2
In danger, yet the
center holds. Unselfish acts
overcome weakness.

1
Halting at the first
sight of danger: the wisest
course when one is weak.

Seven Haiku in Response to Commentaries on Hexagram 40
by Chih-hsu Ou-i and Liu I-ming:
Thunder over rain
dissolves old transgressions. Move
when the time is right.

6
Hawk on a high wall
is dispatched by a great lord:
danger has an end.

5
The developed soul
finds solution, patient with
those who come behind.

4
Tripped up by little things,
lacking strength. Waiting for friends
brings better fortune.

3
Ostentatious, pre-
tentious, inviting attack.
No one else to blame.

2
Centered on your path:
finding a golden arrow,
dispatching all doubts.

1
Dynamic stillness
balanced between hard and soft,
yin and yang. Blameless.

In Response to Anthony’s Commentary on Hexagram 40, Line 2:
Foxes, flattering foxes
frolicking in the field.
Kill them gently,
kill them surely,
one by one
by one.
Seven Haiku in Response to Commentaries on Hexagram 41
by Chih-hsu Ou-i and Liu I-ming:
Balancing two bowls:
strength and flexibility.
Reducing excess.

6
Resting in the high-
est good, the universe your home.
Greatest attainment.

5
Richly rewarded
for maintaining your balance.
Who can oppose you?

4
Reducing illness.
balancing the elements,
truly cause for joy.

3
Three companions are
too many; the lonely gain
a friend. Find balance.

2
In a balanced place;
What use in expeditions?
No losses, no gains.

1
Settling your affairs,
going to another’s aid:
assess first, then act.

Haiku In Response to the Traditional Commentary on Hexagram 41:
Lake yields her essence,
snowflakes soften Mountain’s slopes.
No loss, only gain.
Seven Haiku In Response to Commentaries on Hexagram 42
By Liu- I-ming and Chih-hsu Ou-i:
Decreasing the heights;
great increase for those below.
Everything furthers.

6
Over-reaching. Blame
will surely follow. Set your
own house in order.

5
Truthful heart, truthful
words, truthful mind. Rewards will
follow your true acts.

4
State facts openly;
act impartially. People
will follow in kind.

3
Gaining from times of
misfortune is blameless if
your work is sincere.

2
Great gifts come your way;
Correct, auspicious, true. The
high serve those higher.

1
Straight to your business;
from first thoughts come true aim.
Most auspicious.

Epigrams and Haiku In Response to Commentaries on Hexagram 43
By Liu- I-ming and Chih-hsu Ou-i, Carol Anthony and Some Discussion on Clarity:
Uncomfortable truths—
Speaking out is dangerous
but necessary in its time.
Go somewhere (but not to war).

6
You are the last

out of place
out of time
too weak to cry for help

Give way to the Creative

5
Cutting through the weeds
with resolution. Reason
conquers emotion.

4
Inflexibility:
what do you prove by this? Un-
cover your ears now.

3
False face of vigor
brings only bad luck. Depart,
suffer rain, succeed.

2
Setting watch at night,
preparing for the unknown,
even Fate takes heed.

1
The feet march forward
while the quaking heart stands still:
faults brought on yourself.

Seven Haiku In Response to Commentaries on Hexagram 44
By Liu I-ming and Chih-hsu Ou-i:
An unexpected
meeting with dynamic yin:
state your intentions.

6
A display of horns:
ruled by mundane arrogance.
Humiliation.

5
Hiding your virtues,
aspiring toward the heavens,
heavens come to you.

4
No fish in the bag:
undiscipline intellect
leads to misfortune.

3
Inflexibility
stems from bad habits. Work through
the changes. No fault.

2
A fish in the bag:
personal insights do not
extend to others.

1
Halt your impulses
when they first appear: lean pigs
are most destructive.

In Response to Anthony’s Commentary on Hexagram 44, Line 3:
Spiraling into a vortex
of your own creation,
spiraling
spiraling
down.

Disengage.

An Epigram and Six Haiku on Hexagram 45
Derived from Commentaries by Liu I-ming and Chih-Hsu Ou-i:
As water gathers on the earth;
people gather at the shrine.
Honor ancestors,
Prepare for the future.

6
Lonely at the top
now, an empty figurehead.
Who is the master?

5
Acknowledge the ob-
vious. Delegate in good
faith.  The center holds.

4
Laudable success.
Good fortune follows hard work.
Live impeccably.

3
Of poor beginnings,
seeking teachers where you can.
Slight shame but no blame.

2
A rose among the
thorns, seeking for better things,
becoming blameless.

1
Aimless mob, clueless
rebels. Leave these fools behind.
Distress turns to joy.

Seven Haiku on Hexagram 46
Derived from Commentaries by Liu I-ming and Chih-Hsu Ou-i:
Acorn becomes oak
molecule by molecule.
Slow progress endures.

6
Rising into the
unknown by ceaseless effort.
Overcome weakness.

5
Step by step by step,
slow progress finding what was
always yours. Insight.

4
On the mountainside,
an offering by the king.
Authentic progress.

3
Upward now into
emptiness. Nothing to grasp;
easy to backslide.

2
Sincerely suited
for a ceremony, both
flexible and strong.

1
Rising, true rising;
flexible and following
the strong. Auspicious.

In Response to dobro’s Commentary on Hexagram 46,
Which Might be Productively Applied to Chih-hsu’s Commentary on Hexagram 52
And Anthony’s Further Observations on the Same:
Dissolve the self.
Become the Observer.
Observe the ego.
Observe the thinking heart.
Fly Free.
In Response to Trojan’s Commentary on Hexagram 46, Line 3:
Forward onward now
Into an empty city
Let your heart take ease
Nothing holds you here
always ever onward
Seven Haiku on Hexagram 47
Derived from Commentaries by Liu I-ming and Chih-Hsu Ou-i:
Weary in body,
but alert in mind. Actions
speak louder than words.

6
Exhausted, at an
impasse: the reward of court-
ing danger. Seek help.

5
Though rich within, your
gifts go unrecognized. Hold
to the path. Reward.

4
Exhausted among
riches, weakness slowly yields.
Gradual progress.

3
Tripping on rocks, torn
by jagged thorns, blind: striving
for external things.

2
Exhaustion, then great
reward. Quiet offerings
yield wholesome new growth.

1
Resigned to exhaus-
tion: an expensive indul-
gence. Sadly wasted years.

In Response to Barrett’s Commentary on Hexagram 47:
vanishing lake     secret stream
where does water go?

downward

inward

to
that
silent
space
*

beyond words

An Epigram and Six Haiku on Hexagram 48
Derived from Commentaries by Liu I-ming and Chih-Hsu Ou-i:
An unchanging well:
whether you come or go,
draw water or spill it back,
to the well it is all one.

6
The well now sustains
many; do not shut it in.
Greatest good fortune.

5
Cool spring charges a
deep well, benefiting all.
Balanced and correct.

4
Improving the well
with a firm casing: faultless
self-development.

3
Pure water in the
well yet none will drink of it:
quiet influence.

2
Scarce water for a
minnow, and your bucket leaks:
who can you nourish?

1
An abandoned well,
mud-choked and foul: lacking
proper foundation.

Haiku In Response to Something Emma Said About Hexagram 48:
pebble in the well
concentric ripples rocking
all eternity
An Epigram and Six Haiku In Response to Chih-hsu’s Commentary on Hexagram 49:
Once the furnace cools
and the hammer is at rest,
the golden chalice believes
in the merits of fire.

6
Only shallow wis-
dom in men’s molting faces,
depth in leopard’s spots.

5
Great men, like tigers,
make changes so firmly there
is no room for doubt.

4
Changing your fate comes
by believing in the aim.
Regret vanishes.

3
Premature acts bring
danger. Change first, speak second.
Trust comes in its time.

2
Change has come to pass;
in your day you are believed.
Visit the great man.

1
Simply, humbly clothed;
no contrivance or pretense,
secure in your place.

An Epigram and Six Haiku In Response to Commentaries on Hexagram 50
by Chih-hsu Ou-i and Liu I-ming:
Cooked by wood, by wind and fire,
perfecting heaven’s richest gifts.
Stable, balanced, developing.

6
The jade handle is
untouched by fire. Greatest good
fortune through balance.

5
Handles of pure gold,
strong and beautiful, balanced
and correct. Fulfilled.

4
A leg is broken;
now the feast is spilled. Spirit
slips away. Regret.

3
A rich feast within,
but what’s wrong with the handles?
Practice what you preach.

2
The cauldron is filled,
the base is firm. Enemies
envy your success.

1
Cauldron over-turned:
keep the good, discard the dross.
A poor start ends well.

In response to dobro’s Commentary on Hexagram 50:
Have I become the vessel
of your transformation?
Are you mine?
Who is the Cauldron,
Who the Content?
In response to Commentaries on Hexagram 51
By Liu I-ming and Chih-hsu Ou-i:
Thunder then laughter,
Greatest care precedes true ease.
Nothing disturbs you.

6
Thunder is long past,
yet you are unsettled by
neighbors. Criticism.

5
Repeated thunder:
overcautiousness befalls
you. Weakness will pass.

4
Distant thunder, stag-
nating influence. Falling
into worldly ills.

3
Thunder frightens you.
Trembling, but wise enough to
seek a source of strength.

2
Thunder startles you;
valuables are lost. Do not
chase them, they’ll return.

1
Thunder startles all.
Sages laugh, distinguishing
right from wrong. Joyful.

In response to Liu I-ming’s Commentaries on Hexagram 52:
Holding the mind still:
all divisions disappear;
everything is one.

6
Holding carefully:
inside, outside; all are one.
Firm as a mountain.

5
Holding shut the jaws:
keeping your words orderly;
regret vanishes.

4
Holding the body:
taking care of one’s own self;
no cause to be blamed.

3
Holding at the waist:
backbone breaks, inflaming
the heart. Forced effort.

2
Holding at the calves:
understanding is not firm,
the heart, unhappy.

1
Holding at the feet:
not chasing after stray thoughts;
a great benefit.

In response to LiSe’s Commentary on Hexagram 52:
What does Mountain ponder
in his thinking heart?

This day

This Time

This moment now

And now

And now

Seven Haiku In response to Chih-hsu Ou-i’s Commentary on Hexagram 53:
Steady as a moun-
tain, patient as a growing
tree. Simple goodness.

6
Geese fly out of sight.
Finding a feather: sign of
auspicious wisdom.

5
Geese on mountaintop:
Hopes may be delayed; in the
end, great good fortune.

4
Geese in the trees may
find a place to roost. Docile
following; good luck.

3
Geese on the plateau:
Abandoning your duties,
Losing your center.

2
Geese on the boulders,
Empty minds, filling bellies
Joy and harmony.

1
Geese along the shore:
peacefully grazing, calling
for their mates. Blameless.

Epigrams and Haiku In response to Chih-hsu’s Commentary on Hexagram 54:
Beware an impulsive marriage
before the proper time:
Err in a moment’s heat,
repent in cold tears.

6
An empty chest, a
Bloodless, loveless marriage.
No foresight, no fulfillment,
Bound by empty rules.

5
Princess marrying
a commoner:
her dress is plain,
her virtue radiant
as the waxing moon.

4
Not yet time to act.
Patiently await the moment of
a most blessed union.

3
Impulsive, abrasive,
lacking judgement:
who is surprised the
younger, wiser sister
is preferred?

2
Forever in the middle:
Your chastity and patience
will help another see.

1
Forever last and least:
Your constancy and true virtue
will help the lame to walk.

Seven Haiku In response to Liu I-ming’s Commentary on Hexagram 55:
Bright blessings on your
world! Make hay while the sun shines.
Days shade into night.

6
Victim of your pride,
too good to mix with the world…
Where are your friends now?

5
Golden sunset. Rich
reward for quiet labors.
Celebrate. Enjoy.

4
Day shades into night.
Sages hide in plain sight. Good
fortune when you meet.

3
Through haste, you eclipse
the sun, breaking your right arm.
Too much pain, no gain.

2
Gathering shade brings
on doubt. State anxieties
openly. Friends come.

1
A cohort and a
friend travelling together
raise each other up.

In response to Chih-hsu’s Commentary on Hexagram 55, Line 3:
Total eclipse.
Fat Raindrops plunging from an empty sky.
My right arm is broken.
Still I persevere.
Seven Haiku in Response to Hexagram 56
Derived from Commentaries by Liu I-ming and Chih-hsu Ou-i:
Fire on the Mountain:
Everything in its measure,
At home in the world.

6
Burning bird’s nests, burn-
ing bridges: haughtiness leads
to profound losses.

5
Lose a little, gain
a lot: great praise follows har-
mony in balance.

4
Right path, right mind, still
you are not content. The time
eludes you. Patience.

3
Burning the inn, like
burning your bridges: alien-
ating your helpers.

2
A well-prepared trav-
eler. Good servants find you.
Auspicious, correct.

1
Fussing, fidgeting,
distracted by minor things:
misfortune follows.

Seven Haiku in Response to Hexagram 57
Derived from Commentaries by Liu I-ming and Chih-hsu Ou-i:
Slow progress. Persist-
ant winds sculpt the largest rocks
into tiny sand.

6
Watch it slip away…
Getting soft in your old age.
Let go. Move along.

5
Balanced and correct.
Greatest good fortune comes. Still,
all good things must end.

4
You catch three birds at
once: right speech, right direction,
right balance. No fear.

3
Classic bureaucrat,
sucking up to the big boss.
Don’t you hear them laugh?

2
Dutiful servant,
living as an open book.
Who dares to doubt you?

1
Tentative, vacil-
lating, sorely lacking will.
Time to grow a pair.

Seven Haiku in Response to Hexagram 58
Derived from The Commentaries of Chih-hsu Ou-i:
Great inspiration:
Joy within, joy without,
Balanced and correct.

6
Insubstantial joy,
flattering and cajoling.
Most unenlightened.

5
Bringing joy to the
fallen, your sincerity
inspires right action.

4
Deliberate joy
brings about unease. Release.
Be independent.

3
Pretensions of joy:
a smiling face hides inner
hollowness. Dismay.

2
Joyful and sincere,
confident now in your aims.
Regret vanishes.

1
Joyful harmony,
no selfishness, no doubt.
Greatly auspicious.

Seven Haiku in Response to Hexagram 59
Derived from The Commentaries of Chih-hsu Ou-i and Liu I-ming:
Boundless endless strength,
a windblown ship on the waves.
Enmity dissolves.

6
Dispersing the blood,
forgetting self for the sake of
others. Faultless act.

5
Dispersing impure
things, restoring what is right.
Impeccable act.

4
Dispersing factions,
uniting the whole great world.
Remarkable day.

3
Dissolving the self,
dispensing with ego. Who
is not enriched?

2
Rushing to the aid
of those in need. Threat
subsides; no regrets.

1
A powerful horse
returns you to the right path.
Act now with vigor.

In Response to Chih-hsu’s Commentary on Hexagram 59, Line 1:
Not drowning now,
clutching mane on your great concave back,
breathing deep of
wind
spray
gratitude.
Epigrams and Haiku In Response to Liu I-ming’s Commentaries on Hexagram 60:
Stop. Go.
Know how much is enough,
how much is too much.
Do not confuse consistency
with empty form.

6
Wrongheaded discip-
line; that rigid shell implies
weakness within.
(: …you really should lighten up a bit…  :)

5
Graceful under fire
Consistent yet flexible
Balanced and correct.

4
Peaceable kingdom
achieved through discipline; inch
by inch, yard by yard.

3
Chasing happiness,
Lamenting poor decisions.
Learned your lesson yet?

2
Strong thoughts but weak acts;
ineffective discipline
can’t master itself.

1
Disciplined at home,
Distinguishing right and wrong.
Contemplate, then act.

Haiku and Epigrams In Response to Several Commentaries on Hexagram 61:
Faithfully centered.
Inner joy, outward accord.
Who can not respond?

6
Your crowing may indeed
fly up to heaven,
young rooster.
The question is

does heaven care…?

5
Balanced and sincere,
strength and flexibility
are one. Enduring.

4
Joyous full moon.
She knows mortals only see
reflected glory.
That’s her task.
It is enough.

3
Must you be reflect-
ed in another’s eyes in
order to exist?

2
Quiet shade,
softly calling crane.
From a thousand miles, wise ones hear
and raise a glass of wine.

1
Careful forethought yields
good results. Little rest for
those who can’t commit.

Seven Haiku In Response to Hexagram 62
Derived from Commentaries by Liu I-ming and Chih-hsu Ou-i:
In times of small excess
err on the side of caution.
Honest discipline.

6
Too high from the nest:
a light lunch for peregrines.
Willful ignorance.

5
Dense clouds but no rain.
Dressed up but don’t know where to
go. Wrong place, wrong time.

4
Proceed with caution,
Responding to the moment,
making haste slowly.

3
Small indulgences
grow into shameful vices.
Nip them in the bud.

2
Falling short of your
goal, you do the best you can.
Who can criticize?

1
Flying the nest too
soon, breakfast for a lucky cat.
Vain imaginings.

A Willful Little Poem That was Supposed to Be About Hexagram 62, Line 5,
But Soon Went On Its Own Way:
Fishing in a barrel,
shooting doves on the nest.
Who do you impress with
ostentatious trophies?
Seven Haiku In Response to Commentaries on Hexagram 63
by Liu I-ming, Chih-hsu Oi-i, and Kerson Huang:
Illumined within,
Outward danger soon dissolves.
Don’t let down your guard.

6
In over your head:
what once was found is now lost.
A dangerous place.

5
Lavish sacrifice
contrasts poorly to humble
rites. Great good fortune.

4
Fine cloth turns to rags:
though you watch with greatest care,
doubts will still find you.

3
Banners of war fly,
battling the barbarians.
Do not employ fools.

2
She loses her veil,
it returns in seven days:
Hold a steady course.

1
Lift the robe’s front edge,
the tail may drag in the mud:
you must think things through.

Seven Haiku In Response to Commentaries on Hexagram 64 by Liu I-ming:
Bright outside, dark with-
in, the Tao a memory.
Seek for its return.

6
Celebrating too
soon; over your head in a
jug of wine. Bad faith.

5
Remaining correct,
no cause for regret. Empty
minds find true wisdom.

4
Remaining correct
through seeming endless night. In
time rewards will come.

3
Imagining com-
pletion is most premature.
Seek Sage advice now.

2
No need to hurry.
Who cares what others say? Move
when the time is right.

1
Young fox, thin ice, wet
tale. Too much caution may be
worse than none at all.

In Response to Anthony’s Commentary on Hexagram 64,
With Reference to Hexagram 17:
(Late night drive)
How is it that I’m bathed
in your warm love
across these empty miles?
Does your heart bend toward mine?